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Ça prend plus de slide à ce stade là !!! ca sonne en Ta... à la ZZ Top
un début de texte qui me passe par la tête en écoutant ...
With a gun by my hand
Holster in reach, I take a stand
To a marching band
The beat of my feet brushes of the sand
You know I’ve seen your disguise
A crowd gathers by the sun rise
Tunnel vision floods through my eyes
There’ll be no cries
You showed me how fast you draw
Not fast enough, I saw you stall
And silence would linger over all
My last breath too, I fall
refrain may be ..
And I, know there’s no tomorrow
For tonight, its be killed or die
You know I’ve seen your disguise
A crowd gathers by the sun rise
Tunnel vision floods through my eyes
There’ll be no cries
celle-là, elle est excellente et décrit bien un sujet précis, garde là, merde si tu pouvais façonner un refrain autour du "tunnel vision effect", moi je serais conquis.
ok je creuse l'idée mais de ton coté , hésites pas à t’approprier le texte et le customiser , quand j'écris je pense Français et après je traduit ce qui est pas forcément le mieux pour des lyrics
On s'est deja amuser comme ca une fois, l'annee derniere, paufine le truc, on fait un ghost, je reprends en suivant ta ligne directrice, si tu veux?
je suis rendu là :
V1
With a gun by my hand
Holster in reach, I take a stand
To a marching band
The beat of my feet brushes of the sand
chorus 1
they've learned me there's no tomorrow
their black mamba has bitten me
As always, its be killed or die
their tunel vision replaces my free will
V2
You know I’ve seen your disguise
A crowd gathers by the sun rise
Tunnel vision floods through my eyes
There’ll be no cries
chorus 2
they've learned me there's no tomorrow
their teaching has shaped me
As always, its be killed or die
their tunel vision replaces my free will
v3
You showed me how fast you draw
Not fast enough, I saw you stall
And silence would linger over all
My last breath too, I fall
chorus 3
army learned me there's no tomorrow
their drug has stuffed my skull
As always, its be killed or die
their tunel vision replaces my free will